Everyday,
the lives of American’s are consumed by the constant presence of
advertisements. Although they are prevalent, these advertisements are rarely
given more than a passing glance. When looking closely at an advertisement, the
intentions and projected audience of the product become clear. The
advertisements are specifically designed to fit the projected audience’s values
in order to effectively sell the product. In my advertisements for lipstick,
one ad specifically aims to sell to the glamorous, classy woman, while the
second ad sells to a much more average and normal woman.
I think you have two interesting ads to compare, but i would work to make your thesis more arguable. I think the opening is good, but like Mrs. Mikhaylova said it can be inserted into anyones paper and still work.
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