SWA 21

The issue of the essay is the Occupy movement. It's importance is explained. The author of this essay explains the prominence of the movement and the impact it has had across the world. The author also talks about the dramatic results that have come out of the movement, which includes the violence that has occurred during protests. The perspective are identifiable because they are clearly stated. They are "active protesters of the Occupy Movement, outside sympathizers of the movement that are not directly involved, Political figures that oppose the movement, and lastly, concerned citizens that are directly affected by the movement". The thesis gives great insight into the issue and leads into the paper concisely and effectively. The into summarized the movement and gave great facts and points that made me want to learn more about the movement, while the conclusion lead out with reiterating the 4 perspectives again and summing everything up. I think the essay is extremely effective. There was such a massive amount of research and facts that were in the paper that it made me confident that I was getting the correct information from someone who took the time to work on it. I don't know what I would suggest to the author because I thought it was a great essay.